Poetry/Writing Showcase from Colin Dardis


Extract from All This Light In Which To See The Dead

He tells you that he cuts himself. He tells you this over the phone so you can’t grab his arms and examine the scars, the fresh new lines he has scored. You know a bit about self-harm. You understand that people mutilate themselves to feel control, to regain dominance over themselves when they feel overwhelmed and defeated by the world. This makes some kind of sense in your teenage mind, but you’ve never been tempted to stick a blade into your willing flesh. Perhaps you haven’t been damaged enough.

You want to understand your friend, learn why he feels the need to do this. You find an image of Richey Edwards from the Manic Street Preachers showing off a freshly cut carving on this forearm: depression as entertainment, reproduced by some cheap pop news rag. You cut it out and stick in on the inside of your school binder, get some kind of twisted pleasure from the bemused and concerned looks your fellow pupils give you when they spy it. The cuts say, I am different from you, and I am proud of that difference. I do not want to be like you. I am the nonconformist finding himself as you just die. But still you have not shed blood. Still your skin is intact. 

Curious, and driven on by your friend’s own experimentations, you decide on the point of your compass. You remove it from your pencil case and hold the point to a flame, struck from a match. At this age, you don’t know what septicaemia is yet – something your father would contract in later years and have a heart attack from – but you know that sticking unclean metal objects into you isn’t exactly safe, and fire helps to cleanse, sterilise. You wash the soot off the metal, slightly concerned how much it has blackened from the flame, but still keen. You are left-handed, so the carving will be done on your right forearm. You are not afraid as you make the first scrape. Nothing much happens. You score the same line back and forth, as surface cells of skin start to flake. It hurts. It’s not supposed to hurt. It’s supposed to feel, if not euphoric, then releasing: a crude form of trepanning as all the pain and hurt and confusion escapes from the wound. But there is no wound. The slightest line of red rises on your arm, like a ghost path from a stubborn itch. 

You know there is no way you will apply more pressure to the compass. What did you really expect? You can’t imagine stabbing yourself with it now, although you can imagine others hacking away, smiling as the blood flows. You’ve failed. You’re not even good enough at messing yourself up. You wipe the point of the barely stained compass and return it to your pencil case, return the pencil case to your schoolbag, and never tell your friend your sorry attempt at affinity.


Extract from All This Light In Which To See The Dead

Perhaps the moon is out there tonight. Perhaps your window is facing the wrong face and the other side of the house is being glorified in moonlight. The moon has it good, despite being locked in orbit around here. Humanity has barely grazed its surface. No footprint has left lasting damage. The bits of metal and electronics we’ve left up there sit peacefully alongside the rock and dust, awaiting the next adventurer. It glows like a star but doesn’t has to expend energy producing its own light!

Yes, the moon has a pretty sweet deal. It never has to worry about deforestation, or poisoned rivers, or holes in the ozone layer, or war. The surface of the moon has no idea what it feels like when a bomb goes off. No one’s blood has ever soaked into its soil. It just busies itself with reflection and affecting our tidal patterns, and even then it doesn’t have to work very hard to do this, it’s just a natural by-product of its existence. It’s been painted and captured by artists countless more times than the whole of the Earth. It’s the A-List star of the night sky, and even dares to show itself sometimes when the sun comes round. No one is out-classing the moon! 

The moon has no concept of time and does not count the days until it returns to the same bit of space where it was the previous year. It’s wise enough to leave that folly up to the humans, knowing that time doesn’t have a dimension. Well, that’s what it believes anyway, it’s never heavily mused on the subject. The moon missed the rocks that the humans took though. It doesn’t mind the machinery and all the radio signals back and forth, but it doesn’t think it’s a fair trade. It will see you if you look up at it, but it can’t do anything about the clouds.


Extract from All This Light In Which To See the Dead

I held this belief for quite a few years. I remember my grandmother making me a cheese and tomato sandwich once at her house. I liked tomatoes, but I would quarter them and scrape them clean of all seeds, lest one would darken my tongue. Only when absolutely clear could they enter the food chain. My grandmother did not exercise such caution. But I did not wish to complain and offend her; although it was never drilled into me, good manners were a necessary. So I ate that sandwich, seeds and all, and drank extra milk in the hope that this would drown them and wash the seeds down quickly through my system. 

I’m not sure where the belief came from; it’s not like I thought there was soil in my tummy, awaiting plantation. We must have planted seeds in school to learn how plants grow. I obviously didn’t pay enough attention: all I knew was that ‘seeds’ equals ‘potential for plants’. At some time during my youth, I had planted three apple seeds in the corner of our garden. Apples were another food, along with oranges and grapes, you learnt quickly to avoid the seeds from. Trees take years; kids don’t think years ahead in the future, they mostly live day to day, week to week, unless something big is coming up on the horizon, like Christmas or a holiday. I had a vague notion of our own apples growing in the garden and imagined them soon blossoming. My parents had had a plum tree at their old house on Dublin road, before my sister and I were born. Apparently the branches would bend and break from the weight of the fruit. That was something to aim for! 

Somehow time slipped by and the seeds became a sapling. It was a source of pride for me, that I had intentionally created something growing and alive that we could see and visit every day. I was warned it would be a long time before we could harvest any apples from it, but I enjoyed daydreaming about the fruit that eventually would come. I looked into the future and could see a mighty trunk and thick branches blessing us in the upcoming years, a permanent fixture that no other neighbour had. It might not have beaten the cherry blossom tree a few doors down, whose light pink detritus would blow all through our park and gather on the windscreens of cars; but still, to bring to life one’s own tree was a splendour to behold. Each year, it would grow more and reward me more as it thrived. 

I did not foresee us moving; my parents sold the house when I was fourteen, and the tree’s future, our future together, disappeared. Perhaps it is still there, bringing another family pleasure. I have no idea what type of apple the seeds were from. Back in the eighties, you didn’t have the variety stores have now, so most likely it was a simple Golden Delicious. Perhaps someone else now picks those apples to bake into a pie, one of the rare culinary baked goods my mother excelled in. Sometimes I think of returning to that first home, of sneaking around the side of the house just to glance at the tree and check how it has grown. My wife thinks I should just ring the doorbell and explain that I used to live there, ask if I could go round back to look at the tree; I fear them replying, “What tree?”. It’s better to have the memory and dream; to find its absence, torn up and screaming of vacancy, would be a wound too much on the pale face of childhood.

Poetry by Colin Dardis “So You Want to Earn Some Self-Respect”

Bio: Colin Dardis is a neurodivergent poet, editor and sound artist from Northern Ireland. His latest collection is All This Light To See The Dead: Pandemic Journals 2020-21 (Rancid Idols Productions, 2022). His work, largely influenced by his experiences with depression and Asperger’s, has been published widely throughout Ireland, the UK and USA, and shortlisted for the Erbacce Prize, Seamus Heaney Award for New Writing, and Over The Edge New Writer of the Year Award, amongst others. Previous collections include Endless Flower (Rancid Idols Productions, 2021) The Dogs of Humanity (Fly on the Wall Press, 2019, shortlisted for Best Poetry Pamphlet, Saboteur Awards 2020), the x of y (Eyewear, 2018), Post-Truth Blues (Locofo Chaps, 2017) and Dōji: A Blunder (Lapwing, 2013). His latest album, a long-form ambient piece, is Back To Work (1tracktape, 2021

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